“The View from Room 312”

The sterile scent of disinfectant greeted Daniel before he even reached the hospital doors. He hated hospitals—too bright, too cold, too quiet—but after weeks of ignoring the pain in his abdomen, he had no choice. The ER doctor had confirmed appendicitis. Surgery was scheduled for the next morning.

Room 312 was small but clean. A single bed sat in the center, surrounded by beeping monitors, a rolling tray, and a window that looked out over the hospital’s rooftop garden. A nurse named Carla helped him into a gown and cracked a few jokes that made him feel more like a person than a patient. She had kind eyes, and that helped.

The night before surgery passed slowly. Nurses came and went, checking vitals, asking questions, adjusting IVs. Daniel barely slept. His thoughts spun in a loop: What if something goes wrong? What if I don’t wake up? The room felt too quiet, and the occasional squeak of a cart in the hallway echoed like thunder.

At 6:45 AM, the orderly wheeled him to pre-op. The anesthesiologist explained what would happen, but Daniel could barely focus. Everything felt distant—like he was watching his own life through frosted glass.

“Count back from ten,” the surgeon said.

“Ten… nine… eigh—”

Darkness.

When Daniel woke, the world was soft and spinning. A dull ache settled in his belly, but it wasn’t sharp anymore. Carla was there, smiling.

“Surgery went well. You’ll be sore for a few days, but you’re okay.”

He drifted in and out of sleep for the next twenty-four hours. Friends texted. His sister video-called and made him laugh until it hurt. Nurses brought broth and crackers. He took cautious sips and listened to the beeping heart monitor like it was music.

On the third day, Daniel shuffled to the window, IV stand in tow. The garden below was in full bloom—pansies, roses, and little trees rustling in the breeze. He stared for a long while, feeling something strange. Not quite joy, not quite relief. Gratitude, maybe.

When they discharged him that afternoon, Carla waved goodbye.

“Don’t forget to walk every day. And no lifting anything heavier than your cat,” she said with a wink.

Back home, the silence wasn’t so heavy anymore. He sat on his couch, gingerly lifting his shirt to examine the incision. It would scar, sure—but it told a story. One of pain, care, fear, and healing.

And maybe, just maybe, a little rebirth.

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Author: Michael J McCluskey

I have been a freelance writer since 2013 when I started as a part time writer. I have been a full time writer since 2019. I have ghost written several articles for multiple platforms. I write in various areas of content including cryptocurrency, mental health, addition recovery and the cannabis industry. I enjoy doing the occasional historical or travel content piece. I am an avid poetry writer and an avid sports fan.

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